“The Halloween Story” – A Jennie Story

Every day at lunchtime I tell a story.  Children love a ‘Jennie Story’.  I thought you would enjoy this post from years ago, as ‘The Halloween Story” is always a favorite.  Of course I tell the story with excitement and fear.  Read on!

Storytelling is, and has always been, the foundation for language and learning.  I write about children, yet storytelling applies to all people.  Words and ideas are how we start to learn, and how we continue to learn.

Everybody loves a good, gripping story.  I am the storyteller at school, and all my stories are true- things that happened to me in my childhood.  A pretend story starts with Once Upon a Time.  A true story starts with It Happened Like This.

Whenever I say the words, “It happened like this”, children are captivated.  They know it is a ‘Jennie Story’ and a true story.  Best of all, they are getting far more words and language into their brains because storytelling has no pictures.

This is “The Halloween Story”.  I remember it like it was yesterday.  Children beg for this story even in the summer.  I told it today to a captive audience.  You could have heard a pin drop.

“It Happened Like This”… When I was eight years old I went trick-or-treating with my little sister, Sarah.  Back then children went trick-or-treating alone.  There were no Moms or Dads.  And, we never went out until it was really dark.  All the way dark.  I dressed up as Raggedy Ann and Sarah dressed up as a scarecrow (although she looked more like a hobo than a scarecrow).  We each had a pillow case to collect all the candy which we called our ‘loot’.  We were so excited!

Then my mother said, “Jennie, don’t forget to go trick-or-treating at Mrs.  Crotty’s house.”  Mrs. Crotty!  Oh, no!  She was really old.  She always looked mean and she never smiled.  Her house was dark brick with big bushes and trees everywhere.  Everything was always dark.  Her house was as old as she was.

I said nothing to my mother.

Sarah and I headed out trick-or-treating.  We had the best time!  We got tons of candy, too.  When we got back home we dumped our pillowcases out on the rug in the den and sorted through all the candy.  I gave Sarah all my Tootsie Roll Pops and she gave me all her Reese’s Peanut Butter Cups.  Yum!

Then my mother said, “Did you go trick-or-treating at Mrs. Crotty’s?”  I had forgotten, of course.  When I heard her words I felt like a lightening bolt had hit me while I was falling off a roller coaster.  Again she said, “Well, did you go to Mrs. Crotty’s house?”  All I could do was look down and shake my head.  My mother was not happy!  She said, “Jennie, I told you to go.  So take your sister’s hand and go right now”.

I took Sarah’s hand and we went back outside together.  Now it was really dark and trick-or-treat was over.  Over!  There were no lights on at anyone’s house.  We slowly walked to Mrs. Crotty’s house.  As we turned the sidewalk and walked up her walkway I squeezed Sarah’s hand and she squeezed mine.  I was so scared.  We got to Mrs. Crotty’s porch which was pitch black and surrounded by weird branches.  As we approached the front door I said to my sister, “You knock.”  “Oh, no” she said, “Mother told you to do it.”  So, I took a deep breath and knocked on the door.

A moment later I heard the door slowly creak open.  Just as I was ready to run away, the lights came on and there stood Mrs. Crotty, smiling.  I’d never seen her smile before.  She said, “Hi Jennie.  Hi Sarah.  Come in.”  We stepped inside the door.  “Wait right there!”  We didn’t move.  She ran to the back of the house and returned with two gigantic popcorn balls, covered in melted butter and caramel.  They were still warm.  Yum!

And I was so afraid.  Silly me.

Jennie

P.S.  This is a popular ‘Jennie story’ in my classroom.  Happy Halloween!

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About Jennie

I have been teaching preschool for over forty years. This is my passion. I believe that children have a voice, and that is the catalyst to enhance or even change the learning experience. Emergent curriculum opens young minds. It's the little things that happen in the classroom that are most important and exciting. That's what I write about. I was a live guest on the Kelly Clarkson Show. I am highlighted in the seventh edition of Jim Trelease's million-copy bestselling book, "The Read-Aloud Handbook" because of my reading to children. My class has designed quilts that hang as permanent displays at the National Liberty Museum in Philadelphia, the Fisher House at the Boston VA Hospital, and the Massachusetts State House in Boston.
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74 Responses to “The Halloween Story” – A Jennie Story

  1. Ritu's avatar Ritu says:

    A lovely Jennie story!

  2. Enjoyed this story, Jennie.

  3. beth's avatar beth says:

    oh, Jennie, I love this story! what a great lesson and experience

  4. GP's avatar GP says:

    Fantastic, Jennie! I can well understand why the children love your stories.

  5. I enjoyed this year too! It’s a great Halloween story.

  6. Perfect. You are a wonderful storyteller … and the moral of the story is important. 🙂

  7. Dan Antion's avatar Dan Antion says:

    That’s a great story, Jennie. I think every neighborhood had a house like that. I remember being dared to go knock on certain doors.

  8. Darlene's avatar Darlene says:

    A perfect Halloween story. Even better because it is true.

  9. CarolCooks2's avatar CarolCooks2 says:

    Ahhhhh what a lovely story I’m sure Mrs Crotty was just a lonely old lady and was happy to give you girls a lovely Halloween treat 🙂

    • Jennie's avatar Jennie says:

      When I started telling this story, I asked my mother if Mrs Crotty was really grumpy and mean. She said yes! I guess my sister and I were lucky to have one of her good moments. There must have been some goodness in her soul to make us those popcorn balls. I’m glad you enjoyed this story, Carol. 😀

      • CarolCooks2's avatar CarolCooks2 says:

        I did, Jennie its sad as sometimes we don’t know what makes someone grumpy and mean and to do something lovely for two children she had a heart in there somewhere x

      • Jennie's avatar Jennie says:

        Yes, she did, deep down I guess. I’m sure that’s why my mother was firm about me and my little sister going there. It is sad when we don’t understand grumpy and mean. Best to you, Carol.

      • CarolCooks2's avatar CarolCooks2 says:

        Yes it is I’m sure your mother knew and thought it best you didn’t ..Best to you, Jennie xx

  10. Don Ostertag's avatar Don Ostertag says:

    So nice, Jennie. So wonderful that you made Mrs Crotty smile

  11. I loved this story, Jennie. Have I read it before? I fully understand why the children love your stories. I can hear them over and over again too. Happy Halloween, Jennie.

  12. beetleypete's avatar beetleypete says:

    The story about Mrs Crotty is a lesson to us all. It’s great to know that you continue to educate the kids about the Mrs Crottys of this world.

    Bets wishes, Pete.

    • Jennie's avatar Jennie says:

      That’s an interesting point, Pete. She was not a kind or friendly woman when you saw her, but her true kindness was there that Halloween. See, Gloria might come across the same way when people see her. It’s all about being open to understanding. Best to you, Pete.

  13. A great Halloween story Jennie!

    Thank you!

  14. A great story, Jennie. I can just see the big eyes in the classroom as you told it.

  15. quiall's avatar quiall says:

    What a lovely story! I think you learned that lesson well.

  16. Victoria's avatar Victoria says:

    Jennie! You stole my heart today. I love the distinction for the kids – between “Once upon a time” and “It happened like this”. Brilliant! And Mrs. Crotty? Oh…my sister Lisa and I lived near an older woman when we were newbie trick-or-treaters and she gave out “penny candy” on Halloween and the children didn’t want to visit her. Our dad explained it was what she had to offer and we needed to trick or treat at her house because it would be polite. With our pillowcase loot bags – just like you and Sarah. Thank you for sharing a delightful story. xo! 🥰

  17. Oh, I remember this Jennie story well!

  18. You had me hanging onto your every word Jennie… I bet you knocked on Mrs Crotty’s door the following year.. LOL 🙂
    Wonderful Story Jenny…. Happy Halloween xx ❤

  19. The PERFECT amount of spookiness, Jennie, and a beautiful ending. I’ll be the kids loved it. 🙂

  20. Jennie, I was just as captivated reading this as your Aqua Roomers were for the telling. What a wonderful story. Happy Halloween hugs. 🎃

  21. petespringer's avatar petespringerauthor says:

    I remember this Jennie story from before. It has the perfect amount of suspense without being too scary for kids. No wonder they love it.

    We had a neighbor (nice guy) with a sense of humor who used to like to mess with us on Halloween by serving things designed to produce a reaction for the trick-or-treaters. I remember one year he passed out baked potatoes. I faithfully went to his house each year just to see what outlandish thing he would pass out. Those memories stay with us.

    • Jennie's avatar Jennie says:

      I’m glad you remember! Yes, it has just enough scary to be exciting for the children. What a cool story about your neighbor. Baked potatoes! Great memories. 🎃

  22. srbottch's avatar srbottch says:

    I think there was always one house that scared us. But, what a wonderful ending. I bet the kids were listening attentively, sitting cross legged on the floor with their chin in hands, waiting for the scary moment.

    • Jennie's avatar Jennie says:

      Yes, they were! I even stand up to tell this story. Lights out, of course. There’s always the one scary house when we were kids. I’m glad you liked it (and the ending), Steve.

  23. Hi Jennie, I’ve read this story before and it still made a big impression on me. I think about elderly women living alone and how lonely they are. I know from my own aging relatives that people do become eccentric and withdrawn when they live alone. However, they really need some company and love. This story makes my heart ache from Mrs Crotty.

    • Jennie's avatar Jennie says:

      Well said, Robbie, and spot on. Another note on the elderly – decades ago when teachers were encouraged to introduce diversity into their classrooms, I was in a dilemma, as our town had no diversity. The only people that children might find different or shy away from were the elderly. So, Gloria became my introduction to diversity and the elderly. Remember Milly the Quilter? She was elderly, and the children loved her. Like you, my heart aches for Mrs. Crotty.

  24. Ally Bean's avatar Ally Bean says:

    This takes me back. I remember when people would hand out fresh popcorn balls or cookies. I also remember being scared to go to some doors knowing someone really old lived there. And my mother telling me to go there anyhow. So I did.

  25. Carla's avatar Carla says:

    I love it. I’m sure the children were enthralled and loved your story. I can only imagine the discussions that came out of it, Jennie.

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